Is this Video any Good?
 

I am a Honda Dealer in Tallahassee/Thomasville Florida that would like to get constructive feed back on how we can make our Videos better for consumers. Please tell me the things that people would want to see. Thanks for any help.
http://www.veoh.com/videos/v17364194Y7rND97C


A.

Overall seems pretty good to me. The only thing I would recommend is to switch the text from windows movie maker. Anyone that has ever been on youtube has seen that set up and to me it just screams low budget.

I would make a picture saying the desired text in photoshop or a program of that sort and then enter that as a slide rather than using the windows movie maker ways of entering text.

Well for starters, you can use another editing program rather than the standard Windows i believe that is,Music was subtle not too boring,and ok,dont want to send the wrong message through music, i didn't watch the whole ad to be honest but im sure people would like to see the interior,motor, and of course some sort of salesman with the usual pitch,price,wont be it anywhere else,etc...


Good luck